Chapter 3 of Uncontrollable Love

( The Random Person at the Door)




I quickly grab a robe and put it on, i walk to the door and all i can see if a disfirgured shadow. I told Changmin to get my mace out of my bag and he did, he handed me the mace and i turned on the lights and carefully opened the door. When i opened the door this hot ass Korean guy was there looking at me like he was afraid, then Changmin stop me from hitting the guy and he said: Tommy! Wait! dont hurt him, thats my friend Jaejoong. I said: Oh, im sorry Jaejoon please forgive me for liek about to attack you, i thougth you were like a rapest or robber or something scary. Jaejoong: No its ok please you dont say sorry, im the one who should appologize for coming os late and didnt call Changmin. Changmin: So how come your here so late, and why are you here. I thought you were with your Gf. Jae: No, uh we kind of broke up and she kicked me out the house and i came here because i knew that you had a spair room in your apartment, and i didnt want to stay at hotel or something because i didnt have any money with me and i thought you would let me stay, so would you let me stay here for awhile until i get everythign straight and stuff. Chang: Sure its ok with me, but let me see if Tommy will agree about this, because he doesnt like it when people make a mess at my apartment and yeah, let me. So just sit here and relax, theres fresh Fried Rice in the oven, Tommy made it before we were about to have a special night in bed. Jae: Oh were you guys doing it when i knocked on the door. Chang: Yeah, we were doing it and then yeah you came, but its ok we were about to finish anyway. Jae: Oh im so sorry for bothering you, i just had no place to spend the night, im really sorry about this. Chang: Its ok, i know me tommy will do it some other time when we are "Alone" in the aprtment. So Changmin asked Tommy if it was ok that Jaejoong could stay here for awhile, I told Changmin: Yeah its ok, let me go to his room first and clean it up a bit, its kind of messy from our "Night" today. Changmin: Ok, well hes in the kitchen grabbing something to eat and yeah i'll tell him that your going to fix up the room. I enter the room and started to clean up the place, i began to put new bed sheets, some of Changmin's clothes for him to wear, a towel, a toothbrush and some other junk. I walked out the room and i see Changmin just sitting on the couch watching some television, and i see Jaejoong eating my Fried Rice i made. I walked up to him and said: Hey everything you need for like tonight and in the morning is all on your bed, so i hope you feel well from your break up, so yeah im gonna go to bed now, have work at like 11:30am so i need my rest. Jae: Ok, thank you for providing everything for me, and i hope you get soem rest too. So everyone went to bed, Changmin went to sleep with me, Jaejoong took a shower and slept.



( Morning time and doing some random shit)




I woke up and went to the bathroom, when i opened the bathroom door i accidently walked in on Jaejoong, but he was just half naked thank god, he was wearing his jeans and when i looked at his chest it was like Woah my heart started to pump, i didnt know why, he had like the hottest body ever, just like Changmin but better. I said: OMG! i am so sorry, i didnt mean to walk in on you, i thought no one was in the bathroom. Jae: Its ok Tommy i should have locked the door, but when i was at my house i'd never locked the door, so i think thats one of my bad habits, im really sorry that i let you saw me like this but yeah i hope its ok. I said: Oh its ok, just warn me next time, and oh yeah i get off work at like 4:15pm so i'll come here to pick you up and take you to your ex-gfs house and yeah for you can pick up some stuff ok. Jae: Ok, i'll be here, in the mean time i'll just clean up and stuff ok, well you going to be late for your job so i'll see you then. I said: Ok, well yeah do whatever you want here, this isnt my house yet, im still not sure if i want to live here for sure or still live at my house. So i left to work, Target was kind of slow today, not aht much peopel came and i was already getting bored of the store, I've been working at Target for like a year now since Junior year, and i gotten the employee of the month sometimes but i didnt really care, i just like working at Target. Supposely my boss wants to go work at another Target and hes looking for an replacement, and rumors are spreading around the store that hes going to pick me. I would be so happy if i got the promotion, but if i dont then theres always co-manger right. Anyways my day was about to end, Changmin called me to see what im going to do for the rest of the day and i told him that im going to take Jaejoong to his ex's house and yeah let him get all his junk that he wants to get. So my shift was over, i went to Changmin's place and before i left i told Jaejoong that i needed to shower first. Jae said: Sure Tom Tom, its that ok if i call you Tom Tom. I said: Yeah its ok, you know whats weird Changmin doesnt even call me anything, just Tommy. Jae: Oh really, hm well i like calling you that name i think it sounds adorable with you. * Jaejoong smiles at me when he said that*. SO im in the shower and i started to think, * Why did Jaejoong call me that, this is weird i sorta think hes cute but i couldnt like him, thats my boyfriend's friend, i cant do that to him, oh well ill figure it out somehow*. So i finished taking a shower and i took Jaejoong to his ex's house, we drove threw these nice ass neighbore hoods that like near Vy's house. His ex must have been rich because these house cost alot liek about a quarter of a million dollars. Dam i wonder why that girl dumb Jaejoong, i mean look at him hes so hot and attractive.




( In the Car, talking about things and then other things happened)





I wanted to ask Jaejoong what happen in the relationship but i was to shy and i didnt want to seem to forward or anything. So i took a deeped breath and asked him: So tell me, what went wrong in the relationship. He looked at me with puppy dog eyes, and i couldnt stop looking at him, god he was so hot. Jae: Ok, well i'll make it short since we are like almost there to Eugene house. And yes thats her name Eugene, ok so like we've been dating for like 5 months and i thought our relationship will go deeper, but when we were about to do it for the first time, she looked at me and said no, i was like what the fuck im not that hot for you or what and she was like because look at you, your body is like not hot enough, i need a man who can turn me on and make me horny, and like when she said that, i was like kind of disappointed because i knew she wasnt talking about my body she was actually talking about my "Thingy" because to her my 'Thingy" wasnt that big enough for her and she wanted a man that had a big COCK!, so i guess she wasnt satisfy about my size, i mean my Cock seems normal for a 21 year old guy right. I said: Uh i guess so Changmins only 20 so i dont know, but his look normal to me. Jae: Yeah are you satified by Changmins cock. I said: Uh i cant tell you that but ok yeah im satisfied by him. Its ok, im not that kind of person that cares about that though. I love Changmin for him and theres nothing else. So yeah i guess we are here since you looked nervous. Jae: Yeah we are here, so i'll go in and grab all my stuff, would it be ok if i asked you to come with me and help me out. I said: Suuuuure its ok, i dotn want to stay in the car anyways, wow her house looks so nice outside and inside.




( In the house and gathering things and things went wrong)




We began to walk upstairs and walked into the bedroom. the house was huge, there was like paintings of art every where and there were like flowers like in every corner of the house. We went into his room i guess and he started to look around, he seemed lost, liek his room was huge he ad an open closet and a big bed. I asked: Whats wrong, you forgot what to get. He said: No, im just having repressed memories of this room, and its making me feel bad i think ima go outside for a littel bit and just take a breather. I said: OK, then i'll do it for you since yeah im not doing anything, so i began to get al teh clothes that he will need, dress shirts, t-shirts, jeans, pants, shorts, boxers, and what this letter here i see, hm should i take it or leave it, oh well whatever ima take it anyway might be important. So i started to rumage threw the closet and a small box fell, i opened the box and what i saw was shocking, it was an engagement ring, i thought ot myslef saying tha tthis might be why he was like all wierd a moment ago, he wanted to propose to her but she denied him. Awwwwwww how sad, oh shit hes coming, got to hide this shit. Jae: So yeah i guess you got everything, lets go now, i dont want to stay here any longer. I said: Ok lets go. So we walked out of the room and then we opened the door to get out, jsut when we opened the door, Eugene came and she looked furios at us.



Eugene: What the heck are you doing here Jaejoong.
Jaejoong: Nothing i just came here to get my stuff and nwo im leaving ok.
Eugene: Whos that bitch, thats with you
Tommy: What the fuck bitch, Dont call me a bitch, I'll Fucken beat the shit out of you
Eugene: Whatever bitch just go sleep with him, cuz i didnt.
Jaejoong: Shut up Eugene!
Tommy: Wait what are you talking about Eugene
Eugene: He didnt tell you, haha i guess not, Jaejoong is Bi. Thats why i didnt want to sleep with him because first he didnt have a big Cock and Second of all he kept eye balling my brother.
Tommy: OMG! Jae is this true, please dont lie to me.
Jaejoong: Yes, its true i didnt want to tell you because i wasnt for sure yet and i couldnt fine the perfect time, im sorry please dont get mad.
Tommy: Im not mad, im just in shock thats all, Ok Eugene we are goign to leave now so please move.
Eugene: No. im not going to move, you have to do something for me.
Tommy: Like what?
Eugene: You have to work for me since you broke into my house without any permission and you were tresspassing.
Tommy: Hell to the NO! BITCH! i fucken aint gonna work for you, you can kiss my ass. Lets go home Jae.



(When we were about to leave Eugene grabs Jae's hair)



Tommy: Bitch what the fuck are you doing to him, let him go bitch
Eugene: No since you wont work me, than he has to work for me
Jae: Tommy its ok just left her do whatever she wants
Tommy: No im not going to just stand here, Bitch you better let him go, or i'll fucken Cut you.
Eugene: OOOOOOO~ im scared. *Tommy Grabs a Lamp*
Tommy: Get the Fuck of my man Jaejoong. * BOOOOOOOOOM!, I hit that bitch in the head* taste that BITCH!
Eugene: Security! Securtiy! Sercurtiy!
Tommy: Bitch call for them, i'll beat them too.* Then Jaejoong grabs me and starts to pull me into the car*
Jaejoong: Tommy stop lets go, i dont want you to get in trouble with the Po Po's.
Tommy: Ok ok fine lets go, you understnad now Bitch if you ever lay a hand on my boyfriend Jaejoogn than ima call for back up and beat the shit after you.



(In the car and sad news occurs)




So Jaejoong and I drove away really fast, i was pissed ass hell but in shocked that i called him my boyfriend. I told Jaejoong that i wasnt thinking and that the Boyfriend thingy just popped out of my mouth. Jae: Its ok Tom Tom i dont mind, and thank you for beating her up, but you know i could have done it myself. I said: Yeah i know, but i was like angry so i had to do soemthing, oh and here i found a letter in your drawer, so i dont know if it was your or hers so i just took it. Jae: Oh that letter, uh did you read it. I said: No why who is it from or who its for. Jae: Uh i dont know if your ready for this yet, but i dont know. Tommy: Its ok, i want to know, im curious anyways. Jae: Ok uh its about Changmin getting married with his Girlfriend back in Korea. *Jaejoong looks at me and he seems worried*. I said angerly: What!, what are you talking about, Jae.
* I slammed on the breaks and stopped the car immediately*. What the hell is going Jae spill it to me. Jae: Uh ok but, Tommy! Look out for that car its coming fast. * Boom Tommy and Jaejoong are in a Car accident*

Will tommy find out why Changmin is going to marry that girl or will tommy loose his life before knowing it?

Chapter 2 of Uncontrollabe Love

It was a dramatic eveing on my Birthday. I still dont know if Changmin is going to be here, its almost late and he still didnt call me yet. Gosh why is he being so stuck up atleast eh should have called me or something. Oh well the party was about to end and i still wanted to surprise everyone, so we all drove in our cute adorable cars to "Elephant Bar". When we went into our reserved room and i aksed one of the workers there if they have seen CHngmin, they answerd back " Yeah he was here but he left and he never came back". Hm this is weird what the Fuck! is going on here, i told changmin to be here for my birthday, what the heck is going on. Argh Changmin im going to get so pissed off at you. Gosh i hate him now. Well ok whatever now, im just gonna go to the room and start ordering food. I walked into the room adn boom! this room looked so pretty, Hello Kitty was everywhere, pink ribbons, pink balloons, pink everything aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. whats going on. Who did this omg omg omg omg omg. who did this. Then out of no where a hand came over to my eyes and closed my eyes shut. I was like who are you please show your self but that guy didnt do or say anything, so iw as liek ok enough of this i pulled down his ahnds and he let go and BOOM! it wasChangmin, i was liek AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, whats going on you did all this, omg im so surprised. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Thank you i love it. I aksed him, " I thought you couldnt make it, i was like kind of angry at you for not coming ot my house party, i wanted to introduce you to my friends and family". Changmin, " I know tommy, im sorry i didnt mean to, like when i left to go i looked in the room and i felt liek it wqas missing something so i asked vy to give methe hook up on what you like, and i asked Emerald on what types of songs you like from DBSK, Wondergirls, and Shinee". I said," Awwwwwwwwww really thanks guys i didnt know you guys were heloing him, how come you didnt tell me about this". Emerald," Well tommy we wanted to help him out since he couldnt make it to the house party so i gave him some ideas". I said" Aww thank you em i love you so much" * Em and Tommy hug*. Vy, " Hey what about my hug, i helped too" I said," ok ok vy here you go", *Vy and tommy hug*.















( Everyones Eating and then Alone time)









I see everyone having fun and stuff. Vy's on her bf again and this time shes teaseing him into makin out with er but Tae wont budge so Vy's doin whatever she can. I can see Vy's hand going into his shirt and giving him a turn on, Vys giving him a hard time and shes liking it. Vy: Hey Tae, you know we could do it in the other room but your too innocent and im too naughty so i wont push it. Tae: But Vy what if i change my mind, you know your making me horny right now, You feel that bump under your ass, thats my thingy coming out to play. Vy: Omg Tae, thats a big one, i didnt know you had that one so big, maybe when i turn 21, that would be a perfect gift from you and yeah plus we can drink and do some other ilegal stuff that no one knows. So Vy and Tae came up to me and asked me if they could crash at my place cuz yeah i had a spare room. So i told them sure go ahead, make sure you dont nmake that much noise. So Changmin and i went walking around the rooms checking ot see wheres everyone at, and when i opened the door to one of the rooms i saw Em and junsu kissing. I was like Omg omg, go Em shes taking control of the kissing, then i walked away, but i heard Junsu and Emerald speaking. Emerald: Wow this is weird i like kissing you Junsu Oppa, but i jsut feel like its strange. I've never done this before and this is like our first time. Junsu: I know Em its my first time too you know. Em: Yeah i know, its just at school i see these slutty ass girls kissing like its all grosh and shit and i dont want that happen to us you know. Junsu: Yeah i know so still want to kiss, *Smiles with an Adorable Face*. Em: Yeah sure, as long as you dont take it to far. So Em and Junsu began to kiss again, then out of no where Junus has the nerves to reach under Em's blouse to touch her boob, quickly Em snapped at his hand and told him what are you doing, im not ready yet. Junsu: But i thought we were, we've been dating since i met you at the Korean Concert and we've been dating since after that. Em: I know Junsu Oppa but im just not ready maybe when we are a little bit older or when we date a little bit longer than maybe we could do it. So Em and Junsu left the room and went off to the beach to jsut take some time to relax and look at the moon. They both said Goodbye to me and left. So Changmin told me that he wanted to go somewhere and that he'll be back so i told him ok you can go.





Later i saw that Beth and Yunho went back to the room after they came back from the movies. I guess they went to watched a movie. The party was kind of over so thats why everyone just doing there own thing. When i went into the room i saw Yunho macking on Beth like he wanted her. They were so into it like Beth spreaded her legs and and let Yunho grabbed her Phat ASS!. Beth: Hey that hurts, Stop, dont make me hit you. Yunho: OK ok i wont grabbed it that hard, but you beth we are alone and Tommy and Changmin are somewhere else. Emerald and Junsu left to the Beach, Vy and Tae went to Tommy's House and Van and Mafe are at there Bf's House. So do you jsut want to sit here and make out, or just go deeper into the Relationship. Beth: Uh lets go a little bit deeper. Yunho began to unbutton her shirt, and then unbotton her bra strap. So now beth is half naked. So Beth reached over and turned off the lights. After a hour or so, they walked out and they had a big smile on there faces. I asked them: Hey whats with the big smile huh. They answered: Oh its nothing we just had a great time on your Birthday. I said: Yeah i know, i heard strange noises when i walked by. So they told me that there gonna go to the spot where they met and that spot that they met was that San Fransico. So they left me here all by myself, im here waiting for cahngmin to come back, and he did. we started to clean the areas and then after all that hard work we were exhausted. Changmin: Hey tommy, are you still a virgin, Tommy: Um nope, i lsot my virginity to my ex bf David. Why are you still a Virgin. Changmin: Uh no i lost it to my ex-gf Bomi. Tommy: OK so we both lost our virginity, you know i only did it with him once, cuz like yeah he was like not that passionate with the sex. Changmin: Yeah my ex too, strange we both had bad sex hahah its kind of funny. TOmmy: Yeah i know huh, well anyways you know i have to no place to go since i think Vy is using my house as a sex dungeon. Changmin: So you want to go to my apartment then. Tommy: Sure ok let me grab my stuff then we'll go. So we arrived at his cute apartment and we went upstairs, we watched a romantic movie than Changmin leaned over and kissed me on the lips, then we began to go at it. It was kind of sexy, we began to walk towards the bed and then we began to take off our clothes. I pushed Changmin onto the bed, so i was on top of him and he was under me, i began to unbutton his clothes and tore off his jeans, then we started to make out and began to hit 2nd base then 3rd base. Then out of no where they heard a loud banging noise coming from the door, there was someone at the door, who could it be at this time and who is it, will tommy and Changmin have to stop there Love Making and answer the door or will they just forget it. Who is this mystery person could it be Changmin's ex or could it be Tommy's ex.

Uncontrollable Love

My love life will never be the same again. Let me tell you what happen, it all started when i met this guy named Changmin. Our relation seem so amazing, yet it was crazy. I met him when I was a senior at Jameslick Highschool and he was a Freshman at some college called " Dell Institute" . One day I bump into him when I was at the mall with my five bestfriends in the world. Emerald 18, whos image seems to be weird/nonpisotiveness and sometimes guiltness, Vy 18, whos image is Crazyness/sexiness, Van 18, whos image seem to be hyperness, Beth 17, whos image seem to be a smartass, Mafe 19, whos image to be a flirt with every guy she sees, and me Tommy, 17 and being GAY! I had a fun time with my friends, we walked around the mall bought some clothes to tried them out and then i spotted this hot guy who had the most adorable face ever. I didn't want him to see me, I was so shy of meeting someone new, i braley had a break up iwth my boyfreind David and i never want to go back to him. i went to Lollicup to order some drink becase i was really thirsty from all that shopping. I got the drink then out of no where thi random guy bump me and made me spill all my precious drink on the floor. I looked up and i saw his face, he was so handsome, he wore a black dress-shirt with a white Blazer. This guy looked really hot, i couldn't stop looking at him, his eyes were dark brown.

Changmin said, " Oh im so sorry please let me buy you another drink". I said " Its ok, its no problem but if you want to then okay then". After he bought me another drink i introduce myself, "Hi my name is tommy, whats yours". He answered back, " Oh my name is Max Changmin, but you can call me Max or Changmin". Tommy said," Oh what a nice name, are you from Korea or were you born here", Max said," Yeah im from Korea, how did you know, i guess the name gave it out". Tommy, "Yeah it did, oh well my friends are callin me to go shop again, thank you for buying me the drink i really appreciated it." Max, " Your welcome and oh i know this seems a little to forward, but you think we can like hang out someday to get to know each other more, heres my number so call me when you want to go on a date". Tommy, " Ok sure i'll do that, maybe uh next monday, i get out of school early that day". Max, " Ok then its a date". Tommy and Max both said goodbye to each other and then before Tommy went off with his friends Max turned around and hugged tommy. Tommy smiled and said "Goodbye". Tommy began walking towards his friends everyone was in shock that i'd met someone already just a month after i broke up with David.

( Tommy and Friends Chat)

Vy: "So who's that guy i saw you talking too"

Tommy: " Oh it was some random guy that bumped into me and made me spill my drink, so he offered to buy another one."

Mafe: "So whats his name, I want to know, is he cute Tommy"

Tommy: "Oh his name is Max Changmin and yes hes really cute Mafe"

Emerald:" Tommy are you sure you want to jump into a relationship so soon, like its only been a month since you dump David, are you sure about this guy"

Beth: " Yeah Tommy i agree with Emerald, are you positive hes the right one, he seems nice since he offered to buy you another drink that he made you spill."

Tommy: "Yeah you guys im sure, he gave me his number and i told him ill give him a call. So im not going to jump into things yet ok you guys."

Van: " Tommy, make sure you bring some mace, you may never know he might be a killer or something"

Tommy:" Dont worry van i'll be ok, and if you say so i'll put it in my bag."

Mafe: " Ok well lets go home now. its gettin late, we all will talk about this more at school ok. Lets go home now everyone"

(Tommy in the car)

Well I went home after i dropped off Van and Beth at their homes. I was a little bit curious about that Changmin guy, he was thinking that he was a stranger from no where or a guy that Vy fixed me up with. I was actually jealous of all my friends because they all had Korean Boyfriends and i got a mexican boyfriend. Emerald was with Junsu, VY was with Tae Yang, but Vy calls him Tae, Beth was with Yunho, Van was with se7en, and Mafe well she changes around alot but i know that shes interested with Eun Ji Won. For me i got with David, we've been together for like 7-9 months until i found him cheating on me with soem girl, so I told him its over and now I don't even care about what he does anymore, if I end a relationship its over theres no turning back. So i got home, went to my room, busted out some DBSK songs and started chatting with my friends, and then I reached into my bag and got out his number and saved it onto my phone. I looked at his number and started to think about if i should call him or whatnot. But i couldnt do this all by myself so i asked all my friends and they told me go for it, he may be better than David. So i did, i got my phone and dialed his number.( Thinkin in my head) * Omg please go straight to voice mail, please go straight to voice mail, i dont want to talk to him*. Phone kept on ringing and then it went straight to his voice mail, yes thank god he didnt pick up. Changmin voice mail: "Hi im sorry for not picking up the phone, but ill call you back right away". I said politely, " Hi Changmin its me tommy from the mall, uh i called you because i found the day that i can go for our date, its on June 6 thats my birthday so you can come to my party and yeah meet my friends and we'll see where it goes there. Well call me back when you had listen to this message ok. Well thanks for listening".

( Changmin and Tommy's Phone chat)

Changmin: Hi tommy

Tommy: Oh Hi Changmin

Changmin: Sorry for not callin earlier, i was workin and i didnt get off until now.

Tommy: Thats ok, im on my lunch break anyway, what type of work do you do.

Changmin: Oh i owend the Restaurant in Cambell called " Elephant Bar"

Tommy: Oh my god, shut up, i love that place its so pretty and magnificent, will it be ok if i asked you if you can hook me up like to reserve some spot because ill be turing 18 and i wanted to do something special for everyone.

Changmin: Sure Tommy that will be ok, as long as you dont drink a lot ok.

Tommy: Ok ok i wont, i'll jsut drink a little. Well my lunch break is about to end in liek 3 mintues, i'll txt you when i get out of work okay.

Changmin: Ok well i hope you'll have a good day after you finisish working. I'll see you alter then oh wait i forgot to ask you, where do you work again.

Tommy: Oh i work at Target, its like close to my house and yeah, well got to go now see ya.

( Few Months Passes By and its June)

It the day off my special day, im turing 18 and everyones going to love my party, theres going to be a lot of food at my house and people, so its acutally a house party, but my friends dont know that i planned a secret party for oursleves and our boyfriends. I called Changmin if hes able to get off form work and head towards my house for my 18 birthday. Everyone is here Emerald , Vy, Beth, Van, and Mafe adn there hot ass boyfriends. I see everyoen having fun especailly Vy, whenever i go to her house shes always on top of him teasing him and some other stuff. Emerald and Junsu are upstairs in my room, watching a romantic movie and just having the times of their lives, Beth and yunho are doind DDR with Van and her bf. I see Mafe flirting with some random guys as ususal, i dont see her bf anywhere. And for me, its been 3 hours and he hasnt been here yet, i called him and he didnt pick up his phone. I was getting worried and kind of angry that hes not here on my Special Day. Will Changmin be at the party before Tommy throws a tantrum or will he just forget and tell Tommy that he cant make it.